Recently, many people enjoy taking trips around the world because of many people want to make their life more meaningful. Therefore, they will plan for their trips and also decide to their ways of traveling. Some people prefer to choose backpacking travel. Others will choose tour travel trip. I think that all two kinds of ways all have their similar and difference. That why people have different ideas about their traveling ways.
Backpacking travel and tour travel trip all have some similarities. Two of ways all can let people undergo many experiences. All you do or all you go in abroad maybe it will become your valuable experience. On the other side, you will learn how to overcome the challenges. Once when they are abroad, they probably have to face many problems and they have to try to solve them.
However, both of two ways all have differences. The backpacking travel is much free than our travel trip. You can choose where to go, where to eat, and where to live all by yourself. In addition, you have to be independent and face all the difficulties by yourself. It is unlike the tour travel trip because the tour travel trip has the tour guide to help you. For another tour travel trip, I think that you have to follow the plans which are planned by the agency. Your plans are limited. But one of the advantages is that the tour guide will help you a lot of things.
I think that two ways all have similarities and differences. And everyone have different opinions about for the trips. Thus, before you go to the trip, choose the way that is suit for you.
I'm so proud of you! You have successfully applied the block organizastion to produce this essay. You developed a clear thesis statement and talked about similarities and differences using different blocks. The final thought is nice, too.
回覆刪除I'm sure you will feel like to make your article better, so I am to point out some minor mistakes that I found. The last sentence in your first paragraph doesn't sound right. You may use 'both ways' in place of "two of ways".